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= a single race
Dana Muºat
[23.Dec.05 13:43]
Hy, Joshua!

I have read your poem trying to understand your emotions u had when u wrote it.

I think that the fantasm may be your second personality...or maybe i'm just having something sick on my mind:)

It's a complex poem.

See ya soon.
= Complex is ...
Joshua Vasquez Butawan
[24.Dec.05 03:35]
A whole composed of interconnected or interwoven parts, Phantasm is nightmare, and as far as I know this thing supposed to reflect on my whole interior. This text seems to express the total forget, where you try to figure out your antiquity, but then you end up in nothing, seems that your old trace left, and there nothin you can do about it,
we should just face the present.
Thinking will just make me crazy, that's why I should not mind about it, there are things which doesn't last forever.

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= a single race	Dana Muºat [23.Dec.05 13:43]
Hy, Joshua! I have read your poem trying to understand your emotions u had when u wrote it. I think that the fantasm may be your second personality...or maybe i'm just having something sick on my mind:) It's a complex poem. See ya soon.

= Complex is ...	Joshua Vasquez Butawan [24.Dec.05 03:35]
A whole composed of interconnected or interwoven parts, Phantasm is nightmare, and as far as I know this thing supposed to reflect on my whole interior. This text seems to express the total forget, where you try to figure out your antiquity, but then you end up in nothing, seems that your old trace left, and there nothin you can do about it, we should just face the present. Thinking will just make me crazy, that's why I should not mind about it, there are things which doesn't last forever.