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= I really like this poem. It is complex and I will be thinking and reading it ove
Eric Coursey
[29.Jan.15 22:45]
This is very profound. One of my favorite parts was "how could I tear apart the veil...with such soft hands." I felt you were saying that trying to get across you the message of not being controlled by belief in beauty is impossible in a poem.
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Cristina-Monica Moldoveanu
[23.Jun.15 23:07]
belated thanks, Eric. I think your guess is correct. That is the most diaphanous part of my imagery.

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= I really like this poem. It is complex and I will be thinking and reading it ove	Eric Coursey [29.Jan.15 22:45]
This is very profound. One of my favorite parts was "how could I tear apart the veil...with such soft hands." I felt you were saying that trying to get across you the message of not being controlled by belief in beauty is impossible in a poem.

= feelings	Cristina-Monica Moldoveanu [23.Jun.15 23:07]
belated thanks, Eric. I think your guess is correct. That is the most diaphanous part of my imagery.