| = Frostbite | Wendy Mary Lister [11.Oct.11 21:04] |
| I really do like this..beautiful poem Corina.....and it has a twist of subtle humour! Best Wishes Wendy Mary | |
| = :p | Corina Gina Papouis [11.Oct.11 21:09] |
| Thank you Wendy Mary! Pleased you felt its edge - because if you're not on the edge you're taking an awful lot of space:p. [or so they say...] Cheers! | |
| = Elegant | ofelia apostol [12.Oct.11 00:30] |
| Elegant opening into many semantic levels and emotions. The poem's essence reveals itself at the very end after being skillfully deconstructed. I had the impression of a diagonal rhythm across the page. Thank you. Smiles, Ofelia | |
| = for the love of love.. | Corina Gina Papouis [12.Oct.11 19:30] |
| I wish we had a 'love poetry' category for this poem as this is where frostbites belong..:p Many thanks for your input. Most appreciated. Cheers, Corina | |