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= beautiful
Corina Gina Papouis
[17.Sep.09 01:15]
ending to a beautiful trail of thoughts..in that East Dulwich Coffee shop - (you should recommend it to me!:))..and that question that stays with the reader like coffee grounds at the bottom of the soul: how can cities be content?
tell us Gunsel, how?
cheers,
Corina

= Some are some not
Gunsel DJEMAL
[17.Sep.09 10:11]
Of course I’ll take you there whenever it is convenient for you.

In this poem, my dear Corina, once you are separated from your loved ones (one way or another don’t we all experience separation?) and when separated don’t we treasure the moments we lived.

You search for the loved ones face in the crowds, even a falling leaf can be a reminder...

The cities which separate us physically are they content? Some are some not/the ones which are content are the ones not touched by the mankind and lit by the fireflies and where the moon shines on the sea creating phosphorescence.

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= beautiful	Corina Gina Papouis [17.Sep.09 01:15]
ending to a beautiful trail of thoughts..in that East Dulwich Coffee shop - (you should recommend it to me!:))..and that question that stays with the reader like coffee grounds at the bottom of the soul: how can cities be content? tell us Gunsel, how? cheers, Corina

= Some are some not	Gunsel DJEMAL [17.Sep.09 10:11]
Of course I’ll take you there whenever it is convenient for you. In this poem, my dear Corina, once you are separated from your loved ones (one way or another don’t we all experience separation?) and when separated don’t we treasure the moments we lived. You search for the loved ones face in the crowds, even a falling leaf can be a reminder... The cities which separate us physically are they content? Some are some not/the ones which are content are the ones not touched by the mankind and lit by the fireflies and where the moon shines on the sea creating phosphorescence.