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+ "blue" time...nice, really nice
Anca Maria Morcovescu
[18.May.05 04:59]
Serban,

I like your poem very much.

..."he was a lone in the blue Friday" : the temporal location, "his" state of being, the color of that "Friday" make this verse the soul of the poem.
It is amasing how much it is enclosed in the colorof the time..."blue Friday".

Great work. Keep it up!
I will return with detailed commentaries.
= Poet indeed
Diana Pacuraru
[02.Jun.05 21:42]
Very good capture of the poet's mind indeed. Congrats!

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+ "blue" time...nice, really nice	Anca Maria Morcovescu [18.May.05 04:59]
Serban, I like your poem very much. ..."he was a lone in the blue Friday" : the temporal location, "his" state of being, the color of that "Friday" make this verse the soul of the poem. It is amasing how much it is enclosed in the colorof the time..."blue Friday". Great work. Keep it up! I will return with detailed commentaries.

= Poet indeed	Diana Pacuraru [02.Jun.05 21:42]
Very good capture of the poet's mind indeed. Congrats!