= ;) | dan marius [17.Apr.09 22:15] |
If I were a child and had a megaphone I'd walk the streets and shout out loud these three lines. And watch everybody stop and listen :) | |
= tell 'em | Simona Sumanaru [21.Apr.09 18:48] |
of success stories, completed journeys, love and its answers, will ya? | |
+ beautiful! | Marius Surleac [21.Apr.09 20:40] |
I like the simplicity and the certain rhythm of your poem, especially created by the assonance very well used. A very expressive poem. Loved it! | |
= I erpecially loved... | John Willy Kopperud [22.Apr.09 09:41] |
...the rhythm of that last line. Beautiful! Cheers from Willy | |
= Marius and Willy | Simona Sumanaru [22.Apr.09 09:55] |
Thank you both very much! The credit goes to a friend who saw a poem in this thought of mine. | |
= Something to say | Ada Ionescu [29.Apr.09 22:19] |
The heart as a poetry source... Very comforting this perspective... Just a little bit humble... simple and insightful. :) | |
= thanks, Ada | Simona Sumanaru [30.Apr.09 14:38] |
I am for simplicity, as it is genuine. | |